I am a critic by nature. sorry you guys, dont take it personally.
Zen- Round out your charas they look like card board cutouts give it a background maybe that helps alot. Good work otherwise, keep it up.
Princess Frodo-I love mt i love how you inverted the colors, very cool looking.
Spit- Compared to your other drawings Spike looks traced. Keep it up on the other drawings those are pretty cool, add background to add life to your charas.
Mistress Legato-Very nice character designs, origional?
Aeris- very very nice, great, keep going!
Yarichuu- *Radgore quakes in fear* love the chocobo drawing.
Again sorry for being a critic I will soon post a few of my own art peices and you can all cut me up into tiny pieces with a spoon. 8O