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Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 03, 2007, 05:32:28 am
So who is going to be in the all-encompassing Kumoricon Fanfic?  The main focus will of course be about Portland high school girl Keiko Kumori (AKA K-Girl) secretly the refugee princess of the cloud kingdom who is hiding on earth.  She finds that her uncle the usurper King Ku-Mori-Mori in his secret disguise as the CEO of Kumoricorp is trying to get a foothold on earth.  She hopes to defeat his plans for earth and some day take the fight back to the Cloud Kingdom.

She has a chauffeur styled after Bruce lee as Kato except in black hot pants and chauffeur cap, a former officer in her fathers guard as yet un named

She drives a modified Buick Skylark called the K-Lark that is modified to fly.

May have to have a niece to make use of the Chibi Art

So in every episode she fights the minions of her uncle who use mixed standard earth weapons and equipment and devices from the Cloud Kingdom.

Of course will have to transform into her pretty fighter costumes once a story


Possible guest from the forum will be based off visual images I get from the first look at some ones Cyber Handle

Field Marshall Von Dan: Evil yet dashing and debonair criminal mastermind in a red silk smoking jacket

Waffle Man.  Cook at McWafflemens’s breakfast pub by day and a costumed crime fighter by night.  Leader of the breakfast squad  (this came to me when I remembered seeing rubber waffles in a pet store but now I cant find any and they would make the perfect throwing star for some one we know)

Conner the Card Hunter: (just because some ones Cyber Handle makes me think of a Card Hunter dressed like a big white game hunter or O’Connor from the mummy movies (but more Bishe by request) I’m not sure in the story if he will hunt cards or hunt with cards like gambit

Nyco27:  Android Cat Girl, for no other reason that’s what the handle reminds me of and I other wise have no idea about this persons character.

Kassandra the Dark Lady: Evil villainess teaming with VonDan only to steel his swords sort of like the baroness from GI Joe except in blue Pajamas.

Super Jazz:  Just because some one needs to make her a t-shirt with a big red J.  Maybe a clerk at a fabric store by day and Jazz teamed crime fighter by night (With unseen invisible side kick KB)

Wash and Ozma:  A crime fighting team of Wash an anime fan who thinks he is the next Lupin and Ozma, Osama bin Laudens nieces who looks like a Mortal Combat Ninja Harem girl in black

Mustache Man who has a razer sharp mustache boomarang and wear a derby.

Loli Squad.  An all girl sentai team in gothic lolita sentai outfits with Kwaii animal themes (think power rangers with lace and animal shaped helmets)  and drive EGL battle zoids that match there Kwaii animal themed sentai armor (think 30 foot tall mecanical teddy bear).  

Let me know if you want to be represented in some way like what would your Characters Name, Persona, Costumes and Actions would be.  Or if you don’t want a damn thing to do with it.  And any story idea for the epic

Fire Fox a chibi Kitsune who uses Pyro magic

Discuse....
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: RemSaverem on January 07, 2007, 04:09:04 pm
Vondan you crack me up. I love round-robin fics, but you might check with folks to see if they have other counteroffers for storylines.
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 07, 2007, 08:13:15 pm
I don't think I’m thinking of a round robin fanfic.  I'm working out a story with original characters and will have bit parts for those forum members who want to appear as anime style characters and i'm willing to take story ideas.   I'm working on the prologue now


The K-Girl Chronicles

Prologue: Storm Front

It's really in the vein of Military Science fiction as the war comes to an end and the princess has to escape but I will try to shove in as many Anime Military stereotypes as I can
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Mr_Mustash on January 12, 2007, 11:18:07 pm
That sound interesting! I would read it!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 12, 2007, 11:31:52 pm
your going to be in it as the guy who has a Mustash that is a razer shapr boomarang the only questions is does Mr Mustash wear a Derby or a Bowler
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Mr_Mustash on January 12, 2007, 11:35:16 pm
Deff a Bowler!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 12, 2007, 11:40:32 pm
Quote from: "Mr_Mustash"
Deff a Bowler!


and and I forgot   an Umbrella (Brolly) or a cane
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: BlackjackGabbiani on January 13, 2007, 12:43:58 am
You've got to work in the Soda of Eternal Life. Remember that from the pizza place?
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 13, 2007, 03:21:09 am
Quote from: "BlackjackGabbiani"
You've got to work in the Soda of Eternal Life. Remember that from the pizza place?


Yes I remeber the quest for the Elixir of Eternal Life that’s comes from Soda fountains and is packaged in bottles.  Ohh I can reuse some other ideas of mine like when Princess Polly Palpitine uses her force powers to make her self look young and beautiful (Until a JEDI CHICK pours a bucket of water on her when she is using force lighting and she turns into a wrinkled crone)  

An evil villainess who is an Elixir of Eternal Life addict
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 13, 2007, 03:25:39 am
Just a tast as the first few paragraphs are always good since they get edited or checked every time I open a document




The K-Girl Chronicles

Prologue: Storm Front


The skycar dropped out of clouds, spilling from the swirling mist and falling a thousand meters into the clear sky above the ancient sanctuary city.  Keiko was relieved to be out of the clouds; already with her fourth grade vocabulary she knew fifty-five words for cloud.  The endless gray made her lethargic it reminded her of the vision that came to her when she was ill with fever, half a dream and half nightmare. Other than a few brief clipped words her father addressed into his headphones as he flew, no one spoke. The faint moaning of the wind surging over the craft melded with the whimpers of her baby cousin as she lay in the Queens arms.  She closed her eyes, all was gray and she could hear a faint whisper in her ear… destiny.
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Mr_Mustash on January 13, 2007, 09:41:44 am
YAY!!! ^^ Off to a good start i say. I cant wait to read the whole thing! lol
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: BoredHorror on January 16, 2007, 07:53:03 pm
oh boy, this is interesting, lol.
you can include me in there with my keyblades if you'd like. :P

it's off to a good start
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Mr_Mustash on January 16, 2007, 08:07:47 pm
w00t for boomerang mustache man!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: cupcake_abuser_zooshi on January 16, 2007, 08:47:16 pm
Sounds fantastic!
I say go for it!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 16, 2007, 08:52:33 pm
Thats it!  In one of the stories the Chibi Niece will have to stop some one who is abusing the cupcakes at school
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Shadow on January 16, 2007, 11:07:42 pm
XD That sounds very interesting. I would read that!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Waffles on January 16, 2007, 11:09:21 pm
any idea of me being a hero is a good idea goggle squad also needs a good  spot!!!!! go vondan go

hah ha!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 16, 2007, 11:59:38 pm
Quote from: "Waffles"

any idea of me being a hero is a good idea


I'm envisioning a breakfast themed Casey Jones



Quote from: "Waffles"

goggle squad also needs a good  spot!!


That is why waffle man has his breakfast squad.  You need to discuses among yourselves who will be what breakfast food.  The only idea I have is that The Jew could be kosher potato pancake man or Latkas Boy.  And there could be the swedish Cousin Krumcake  and the French girl they all desire Crep Suzet
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: totemo_oishii on January 17, 2007, 08:48:19 am
will this story have pictures with it? :3

i want to be a character ...please? ^w^
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Neko_Chan on January 17, 2007, 10:13:57 am
Ahh. XD Are you making my lolita friends and I characters in your story? Because of that picture of all of us? We do not fight crime! XD;;;
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 17, 2007, 12:57:12 pm
Quote from: "totemo_oishii"
will this story have pictures with it? :3

i want to be a character ...please? ^w^


Only if people add pictures!

What would your NPC do


Quote from: "Neko_Chan"
Ahh. XD Are you making my lolita friends and I characters in your story? Because of that picture of all of us? We do not fight crime! XD;;;


OH so you would rather the Loli Squad commit crimes


EDIT

That’s it!

The Loli Squad can attack the Oishii Teashop this campaigns version of Uwajimaya.  Using Kwaii animal themed Mechs (Think of the cat shaped Power ranger mechazoid with ribbons and bows) they take the shop girl Totemo hostage in return for one million tea snacks (crumpets, scones finger sandwiches)
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Waffles on January 17, 2007, 01:34:52 pm
Waffle man is pleased!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: RemSaverem on January 19, 2007, 06:55:35 pm
latke boy! oy vey!
vondan what's it going to take to get you to submit something to the actual fanfic contest!

and hey if you are like watching the cosplay room or whatnot what is to happen to the repair station?
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: Vondan on January 20, 2007, 05:48:23 am
Quote from: "RemSaverem"

vondan what's it going to take to get you to submit something to the actual fanfic contest!



Is it a fanfic if it is really just an original story with anime themes and styles?

But sure I can submit it.  

I'm still working on the prologue, which is what I imagine it was like in Sailor Moon when the bad whoever attack the happy kingdom and the Queen and Prince have to evac and send there daughter back in time and the Prince disappears maybe is dead and the queen is in a coma.  So the Prologue is more about her parents and bodyguard and one long running fight so far nine pages long and half of that is Dick and Jane style and one sentence of dick and Jane is usually a paragraph of finish manuscript


Dick flew the mech

See the mech fly said Jane

this translates as

There was a tremendous echoing boom and every one in the courtyard looked behind them to see the immense doors of the museum’s great hall swing open and clang into place.  Out of the darkness within stepped a metal humanoid 30 feet tall painted 10 shades of gray camouflage.  The iron giant stood in the doorway for a moment then took five steps down the grand stairs and leaped into the air as jet flames exited the feet.  Three more mech from the CCA (Cloud City Auxiliary.) followed.
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: totemo_oishii on January 20, 2007, 06:45:47 pm
oh! i was to be the cosplay kaito - "the cosplay bandit"!
Title: Idea:Keiko Kumori EPIC Kumoricon Fanfic with many Mary Sues
Post by: cartopmeteor on January 20, 2007, 08:13:57 pm
This is Brilliant! I like the idea.  :D